Sunday, December 5, 2010

Sunday Haiku: Hair and Loss

When you're going bald
and look around, you see that
lots of guys are not.

Author's note: the author's wife has always been his best and favorite editor.
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1 comment:

  1. PaigeDecember 6, 2010 at 10:19 AM

    1. Last line has 4 syllables. Suggested edit: "lots of guys are not."

    2. You're so cute, you don't need hair.

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